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kizz81:
hello,
as part of my efforts to raise money for the air ambulance me and my dad are running a raffle for a curry for two at a local indian,
this will be presented to lots and lots of business owners in  th local area,

im really struggling on what to write on the website ive created especially for it, any help / ideas more than welcome

i have this picture that needs abit of lightening up i think....



anyone from mansfield / nottingham area that likes curry then please keep your eyes on this site, and buy a raffle ticket when the come available ...  www.landyrally.webs.com <<< we thought that because its simple to remember but still related

cheers
kieran

Thrasher:
You need to proof read the text. There are a lot of basic mistakes (spelling etc) that will not endear a local business.

kizz81:
cheers, will do, i guess that comes of working until past 2 in the morning :lol:
www.landyrally.webs.com

cheers thrasher, any more advice?
 






kieran

Mark_Solesbury:
2 mins in photoshop... Slightly better.

Removed the date and time from the front also. Looks better on a website without that.

Id take one from the front for maximum promotion of the shop.

carbore:
dont know if you could get that "Crush centre" thing removed or if its part of the hosting template.

You may find that another system has less or more appropriate adverts.

Keep at it, good luck.

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